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Galileo’s Notes on Ptolemy

Copernicus and Galileo, who are credited (perhaps in slightly overstated fashion) with entirely recontextualizing our place in the universe, are thought of in this way, but the reality is that most seemingly revolutionary thinkers were less people who ran in a different direction from everyone else, and more people who saw the trail ahead more clearly and could take the next few steps for us.

Gradations of Omniscience

These terms we use – first person, second person (please don’t use second person), third person limited, third person omniscient – are an easy shorthand to describe how we are choosing to approach narration in a given piece.  The more I work with different approaches to viewpoint and storytelling, though, the more important I think it is that the description come after the choice of viewpoint.

Reaching for Words

I am more aware of the words I am choosing, I think about the writing itself more with each sentence, and that is a problem.  It makes me more aware of the gap, makes the gap between the story I want to tell and what seems to be appearing on the page loom larger.