Gradations of Omniscience

These terms we use – first person, second person (please don’t use second person), third person limited, third person omniscient – are an easy shorthand to describe how we are choosing to approach narration in a given piece.  The more I work with different approaches to viewpoint and storytelling, though, the more important I think it is that the description come after the choice of viewpoint.

Reaching for Words

I am more aware of the words I am choosing, I think about the writing itself more with each sentence, and that is a problem.  It makes me more aware of the gap, makes the gap between the story I want to tell and what seems to be appearing on the page loom larger.